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Monday, August 10, 2020

When I headed to school

 


Today for writing we did basically like a poem but with similes and this is what I came up with. We could also Make it really discusting so just take a look. 

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  1. AnonymousAugust 14, 2020 at 11:52 AM

    Talofa Lava Olivia!

    It's Ruta from Waikowhai Primary School. I'm at home commenting because of Covid - 19 in South Auckland. This has been a Crazy year with Covid - 19! I hope you keep safe at home. Well back to your blog post, it is fabulous! I love google drawing and it has some humor in it as well. I really like how you described when you are heading to school everyday and how you know you are ready. I like the colours of the background as well. Maybe you could use a bit more writing on the blog post. Overall you have done a stunning job!
    Bye!

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