Kia ora, I am a student at Belfast School, Welcome - Haere Mai. I am Year 6 and Miss Wilkinson is my teacher. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share and Grow.
Thursday, August 6, 2020
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post

Malo Olivia!
ReplyDeleteWhat detailed writing about the purple crayon. I loved that story when I was 7 years old. It's still my favorite. By the way it's Ruta from Waikowhai Primary School. I like all of the colours in the background and it's stunning! Your writing has good punctuation and there is no spelling mistakes. Maybe you could draw your own purple crayon and you could write a bit more on your blog post as well.
Any who, Fabulous job and keep up the work! Stay safe, keep safe, enjoy your weekend!