Story starter!
It had all started out as a dare.
“No-one is brave enough to camp out in the woods all alone” they had all said.
So far, he had proved them wrong he had actually left his house heading towards the woods.
As he reached the woods he found a perfect spot to campout so he got his tent, started putting it up, started a fire and roasted some marshmallows.
As night came it got darker and darker and darker.
While he was trying to get to sleep in his tent he heard a noise coming closer and closer and closer.
So he went outside and then he realized it was another person that got dared to do the same thing that he did and they never let him back that's why he had been out there that whole time, he was the little boy that went missing!
Sick sentences!
Normal: The boy opened the tent flap. He look outside. It was light.
WhatI changed it to: The little boy opened the tent flap. He looked outside. It was very light.
Question time!
Who has dared the boy to camp in the woods? His friends
Why have they dared him to venture into the woods?They were playing Truth or Dare
What do you know about him/what can you guess about his character? A smart little boy with brown hair
Why has he chosen to camp out in the woods? So he could prove that he was brave
Has anything happened during the night? No
What will happen when he leaves the tent? He finds someone else
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