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Tuesday, May 12, 2020

The birds

Story starter!

The bird’s eyes were gold coins, shining brightly in the reflection of
the camera’s long lens. Holding his breath, the photographer
pressed lightly on the button to capture this magical moment.
Click, click, click. Neither the parrot nor the photographer moved.
Curiosity enveloped them both as they examined each other
closely. Suddenly, the peace was disturbed…by one of the most
friendly birds on the planet.
But they weren't so friendly now.The birds were flying around the
park scratching everyone he or she sees. But wait there are
thousands more swooping people trying to scare them but why?
Someone said “ Everyone take cover quickly” so everyone took
cover.
10 years later we had finally found out what had happened. There
was a company that put a medicine inside one type of animal but
then it spread to many many more.
What will happen next…


Sick sentences!

Normal:The bird looked into the camera lens. The photographer
kept very still.
What I changed it to:The curious bird looked into the camera lens.
The photographer had to keep very very  still.

Question time!

Where is the photographer taking his picture? In the park
How did the photographer get so close to the parrot without it flying
away? It was just I very curious parrot 
What do you think the photographer would be thinking? If the bird
could speak, what would it say? Hang on I am just trying to look.



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