Story starter!
Dad’s home science experiment had gone horribly wrong! He had zapped
the kids in the garden with his new
ELECTROZORBTASTICLASERJETBRAIN-GUN, which was supposed to
make his three children the smartest children in the entire world. Instead,
the zap had back-fired, making Dad even more brainy, but the children…
Extremely tiny!
the kids in the garden with his new
ELECTROZORBTASTICLASERJETBRAIN-GUN, which was supposed to
make his three children the smartest children in the entire world. Instead,
the zap had back-fired, making Dad even more brainy, but the children…
Extremely tiny!
Stood in the middle of the garden path, they suddenly found themselves
running as fast as they could away from a rolling pebble (which was
actually tiny, but now seemed as big as a house).
running as fast as they could away from a rolling pebble (which was
actually tiny, but now seemed as big as a house).
They kept running and running and running, until they came to a dead end
they couldn't get out anywhere. They had to think quickly before they both
became a pancake.
they couldn't get out anywhere. They had to think quickly before they both
became a pancake.
But as they turned and started running, a soccer ball went flying towards
them. They turned the other way and started to run until they realized
everything had stopped like the pebble and the soccer ball yayayay.
them. They turned the other way and started to run until they realized
everything had stopped like the pebble and the soccer ball yayayay.
Sick sentences!
Normal:The stone started to go. The children ran. They felt scared.
What I changed it to:The stone started to roll and then roll even faster.
The children ran as fast as they could. They felt very very scared.
The children ran as fast as they could. They felt very very scared.
Question time!
What noise do you think the rock might be making as it rolls? A crumble
How will the children escape? People stopped everything
What else will the tiny children encounter? A soccer ball
If you could have any superpower that could help people in some way,
what would it be? Flying
what would it be? Flying
What advice would you give to people when dealing with their problems? I
don't know
don't know
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