Kia ora, I am a student at Belfast School, Welcome - Haere Mai. I am Year 6 and Miss Wilkinson is my teacher. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share and Grow.
Thursday, June 18, 2020
My Ice Cream
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Hello Olivia! My name is Rael and I am a student from Waikowhai Primary School. I am amazed by your digital ice cream. I love how you used alliteration for the name of it. I think it is a creative flavour you made. Superb thinking too, the colours you used stand out a lot and would attract more attention. Maybe next time, you could add in why you did this.
ReplyDeleteOverall this was a great blogpost. I am thrilled by your creation. If you want, you could check out my blog at http://wpsraeln.blogspot.com/
Have an awesome weekend, blog you later!!!