Kia ora, I am a student at Belfast School, Welcome - Haere Mai. I am Year 6 and Miss Wilkinson is my teacher. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share and Grow.
Thursday, December 12, 2019
Summer learning journey day 4-1
2 comments:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
Kia ora Olivia, my name is Rudy and am a student of Waikowhai primary in Hauraki in Mt Roskill.
ReplyDeleteI really like how you described the way you could be principal for the week. I like the post you made for your ideas.
I really enjoyed was all the ideas you could change in this school because it would become more fun. Especially when you said to add the flying fox.
Maybe next time you could add more stuff about the learning. You could probably change some other ones about the learning to make it more fun.
You have done really well doing your blog post! Make sure to visit my blog https://wpsrutal.blogspot.com/
Well done!
Kia Ora Olivia, I’m Sophie from Marshland School,
ReplyDeleteI liked how you put in a really cool background and made the font white so it’s easy to read.Maybe next time you could add an introduction or description so the readers know more about it. Also maybe next time add a question or a catchy title.This reminded me of when I was on camp at Spencer Park and my friends and I were talking about if we were principals.